Saturday 10 September 2011

2011 Trial Papers for Directed Writing

SBP 2011

Recently your school had organised the 1 Murid 1 Sukan  1 Malaysia Run. As the secretary of the Athletics Club, you have been asked by your teacher to write a report about the event to the Principal.
In your report, you have to state the benefits of this activity.

1 Murid 1 Sukan  1 Malaysia Run

Date                         : 2nd July, 2011
Time                        : 7.45 am - afternoon
Participation             : 1,400 students
Route                       : 1.5 kilometres
Objectives                : i.    to increase fitness - stamina
                                  ii.   to instil unity - students
                                  iii.  to excel - sports
Activities                  : i.    aerobic exercise
                                 ii.    futsal competition
                                 iii.   exhibitions

When writing the report, you must:
  • address you report to the principal
  • provide a title
  • include your name
  • use all the notes given
Note:
For your report, you will receive up to 15 marks for the format and content points, and up to 20 marks for the quality of your writing.

2011 Trial Papers for Continuous Writing

SBP 2011 - Continuous Writing

Write a composition of  about 350 words on one of the following topics.

1.   Describe the best teacher you have ever had in your life.
2.   The importance of hygiene among school students.
3.   Write a story ending with: "... I realised that every word she said was true."
4.    All students should  learn traditional dances.
       Do you agree?
5.   Future.

Tuesday 16 August 2011

PMR Trial Papers 2009

SUMMARY

PRACTICE 1 : NEGERI SEMBILAN

Read the article and answer the question that follows.
Rubber is one of Malaysia’s main agricultural crops. Rubber trees are cultivated in plantations and estates all over Malaysia. Rubber is a valuable export commodity. Manual labour is still involved in the processing of rubber. Estate workers use traditional tapping knives or modern motorized ones to tap the rubber trees. The latex collected by the workers is sent to the factory in large containers. At the factory, formic acid is first added to the latex. This is a special chemical to coagulate the latex. The mixture is then poured into rectangular moulds.
When the latex hardens, it is poured out from the moulds. The latex now looks like thick blocks. The blocks are passed through roller machines to make sheets. the thin sheets even have designs and the name of the plantation on them.
When this is done, the rubber sheets are dried either in the sun or in a smoke house. The rubber sheets dried in the smoke house are of better quality. Finally, the smoked rubber sheets are tied into bales, ready for export. Some are sent to local manufacturers for further processing into other rubber products.

Write a summary on how rubber is processed in the factory.
Begin your summary as follows:
     When the latex from the rubber trees reaches the factory ...
PRACTICE 2 : MELAKA

Read the passage and complete the following task.
Newspapers have become a daily necessity, especially in the city where people have to be aware of what is happening around them. Inspite of the television or Internet giving us information, most people still prefer the feel of the actual newsprint.
The newspaper is indeed important as it is a powerful tool to inform the public on various issues. It has a wide coverage as the estimated number of readers is about 10 million in Malaysia alone. Important and shocking news alike are quickly known in the nation through newspaper publications. Every day, the front page news captures the attention of the public and is almost always a topic in people’s conversations.
The business section of the newspaper leads a helping hand to the investors who are keen on knowing about the companies they have invested in. The comics are a delight to the young and old alike.
The journalists, the newspaper is a means through which they are given a chance to voice their opinions and make their stand on many issues.
For companies looking for an avenue to advertise their products, the newspaper is one of the best choices. Because of the large number of people who read the newspapers, their products will be known by many.
Therefore, it can be concluded that the newspaper is an important source of information.

Write a summary on the importance of the newspapers.
Begin your summary as follows:
        Nowadays newspapers are important to the public as they give …

PRACTICE 3: KELANTAN

A tortoise was dissatisfied with his lowly life and with crawling about on the ground at a snail’s pace. He envied the birds, which could soar high into the clouds whenever they desire. He thought that, if he could but once get up in the sky, he would be able to fly with the rest of them.
So, one day he offered an eagle all the treasures in the ocean if he would only teach him how to fly. The eagle declined and assured him that the tortoise’s desire to fly was not only absurd but also impossible. However, the tortoise kept insisting and pleading to the eagle to fulfil his wish.
After looking at how serious the tortoise was about flying, the eagle did not have the heart to refuse him and he eventually agreed to teach the tortoise to fly. Therefore, he carried the tortoise high up in the air, and as he let go off him, he said, “Now spread your legs!” But before the tortoise could say anything to him in response, he plunged straight down, hit a rock, and was dashed to pieces.
The moral of the story is we should always be grateful of who or what we are no matter how unhappy we are with our lives.

Write a summary on the events that led to the tortoise’s death.
Begin your summary as follows:
       It all began when the tortoise started feeling unhappy with …


PRACTICE 4 : PERAK

We all worry. Most of the time worrying is a normal human behaviour that helps us to think clearly and protect our loved ones. But sometimes worrying gets out of control and the sense of anxiety it creates can leave us feeling stressed. Here are a few tips to help you stop worrying.
An old saying says that “a problem shared is a problem halved”. So, never worry alone. The more you look at a problem on your own, the worse it can seem to be. One of the best treatments for worrying is having good friends that you can talk to openly.
Physical exercise is one of the best ways of reducing anxiety. Exercising your body releases chemicals in the brain that help calm you down. Exercise also helps you sleep better. And sleep is the very best tonic for overcoming worry.
The worst part of worrying is it can create negative thoughts. Learn to turn negative thoughts into a positive mind set. This technique teaches you to look at things in a different kind of way.
If worrying is becoming serious and affecting your quality of life, seek help from your doctor or a counsellor.
(Adapted from Just English, Vol 2 Issue 2, 2005)
Write a summary on ways to overcome worrying.
Begin your summary as follows:
        There are several ways to help a person stop worrying …

PRACTICE 5 : KEDAH

Nowadays you do not care about your friends. You prefer to check your emails in the middle of the night as the internet has become the centre of your world. It looks like you are addicted to the Internet maybe because it provides a lot of information. You meet people without having to disclose real details about yourselves and you have a feeling of being in control of each situation.
The Internet is also a highly accessible tool. You do not have to leave home and it is usually installed in your room. Just as gripping movie or an exciting book is an escape from reality, so is the Internet. you are never alone, you can be any person you want to be and you will always find friends there.
The good news is that there is something you can do to overcome the addiction. You can set aside in advance one or two afternoons a week to do something away from home, for example, take a walk somewhere, go shopping or do anything else that you once enjoyed doing. Meeting friends at least once a week is also a good idea. To avoid spending too much time on the Internet, you can take up a hobby at home such as gardening or playing a musical instrument.

Write a summary on the reasons for Internet addiction and ways to overcome it.
Begin your summary as follows:
        You might be addicted to the Internet because it provides …


PRACTICE 6: PAHANG

Recycling is a means of processing used things to be used again as new products. We recycle old paper bags, bottles and plastic bags to reduce their production. Besides that, in recycling, we use things like newspapers, aluminium cans and garden refuse to make new things.
With the advancement of technology, natural materials are becoming scarce. Therefore, human beings have resorted to recycling to avoid the raw materials from perishing. It is also important to reduce the amount of waste in the environment. It is sad to say in a day, human beings discard many things. Some of these things can be recycled. Therefore, when we reuse things, we throw away fewer items.
Landfills and dumpsites are places where rubbish is disposed. These landfills are limited, so we must learn to save space. In order to do so, we must recycle the things we use in our daily lives. We can recycle glass containers, aluminium cans, paper and shopping bags.
In recycling, we save energy. During a production process a lot energy will be required to produce a new product. The by-products of these new products are toxic waste that can be harmful to mankind. hence, through recycling, pollution can be reduced.
We recycle materials to save money. It is a cheaper method of waste disposal than landfills. We can also make creative handicrafts and gifts from used items as decorations for the home and as presents to friends. Besides this, the recycled materials can be sold to gain some revenue for the family. Beautiful cards, gift wraps and decorative home items can be made from recycled materials thereby helping the cottage or home industries.

Write a summary on why we must practise recycling.
Begin your summary as follows:
        People should not throw unwanted things which can be recycled …


PRACTICE 7: SABAH

More and more teenagers are logging on to the internet every day. Although the Internet is a great source for research projects and other information, there are also dangers involved with surfing the Web. The person you meet online may not be who or what he or she claims to be. Someone who says that he is a 15-year-old boy may actually be a 50-year-old man pretending to be a teen for inappropriate reasons, such as to send pornography materials or to lure teens into unsafe situations.
Never give out personal information, such as your name, home address or phone number, the name of your school, photographs, credit card numbers or the names of your parents without permission from your parents. Do not agree to meet the person without any adult accompanying you. Do not give out your password to anyone. In chat rooms, use a name that is not gender-specific so you are less likely to receive pornographic materials or other forms of harassment. If you do receive pornographic materials, report it to the local police department.

Write a summary on how to stay safe on the Internet.
Begin your summary as follows :
        To ensure safety when going online, never give out personal …



PRACTICE 8: JOHOR

You are responsible for your own expenses. So, do not complain about them. Study your lifestyle and you can save money by readjusting your routine.
If you love shopping and visiting the supermarket four times a week, cut it down to once a week. Whenever you enter the supermarket, you tend to buy one or two more items which are not in your shopping list. If the unwanted items cost about RM10.00, you will save RM 120.00 per month. That does not include the cost of transportation.
You can save money too if you use the discount vouchers or redeem reward points. The items redeemed can be used personally or given away as gifts. You will save about RM200 per annum.
You can also save money if you check your handphone, internet and ASTRO bills. Ask the service provider to offer the best plans available. By doing so, you can save money, ranging from RM 100 to RN 200 per year.
Furthermore, electronic appliances at home use up electricity even when they are not in use. Switch off and unplug them when you do not use them so as to save some money on electric bills.
Cutting down on dining outside is another way to save money. You can save about RM 300 to RM 500 yearly. Instead of dining outside weekly, do it once a fortnight.
Stop complaining and start planning. You can save enough money for your future.
Adapted from Readers’ Digest, 2007

Write a summary on how to save money.
Begin your summary as follows:
         Some money can saved on daily expenses if we …


Practice 1 :

1. Formic acid is added to coagulate / harden the latex.
2. The mixture then poured into moulds.
3. The hardened latex is passes through roller machines.
4. The sheets are dried in the sun or in a smoke house.
5. The sheets (they) are dried into bales, ready for export.



Practice 2 : Answers:
- cheap and affordable
- available within easy reach
- a powerful tool of communication
- contains information
- interesting articles that cater to different readers of different needs and taste.
- reach a wider range of buyers
- saves time, money and effort for the advertisers.

PRACTICE 3 : Answer

1. his (lowly)life (and crawling about on the ground at a snail’s pace)
2. he wanted to fly in the sky
3. he offered an eagle treasures if he taught him how to fly / he asked an eagle to help him
4. The tortoise kept on insisting and pleading
5. the eagle agreed and carried him in the air
6. when the eagle let go off him, he plunged down and hit a rock.




PRACTICE 4 : Answer:
1. never worry alone
2. having good friends to talk to (openly)
3. doing exercise to reduce anxiety
4. exercise helps you to sleep better
5. sleep is the best tonic to overcome worry
6. learn to turn negative thoughts into positive mindset
7. seek help from doctor or counsellor
(any 5 content points)



PRACTICE 7: Answer:

To ensure safety when going online never give out personal information without permission from your parents. Never agree to meet the person alone. Do not give out your password to anyone. Use a name that is not gender specific so that you are less likely to receive pornographic material or harassed. If you do receive pornographic material, make a police report.

PMR Trial Papers 2009

PMR TRIAL PAPERS 2009

NOVEL

Perak Based on one novel you have read, state what you like about the story. Give reasons to support your answer.

Melaka Choose one of the novels above. Then write on one of the following moral value
i. courage
ii. loyalty
Give evidence from the novel to support your answer.

Kelantan Based on one novel that you have read, write about a character who has taught you an important value in life. Give reasons to support your answer.

Kedah Choose one of the novels above. Then write about a character who is not a good example to you. Give reasons why he or she is not a good example.

Pahang Good and evil characters are portrayed in the novel that you have read.
Based on one of the novels above, write about an event that shows their good or evil acts. Give reasons to support your answer.

Sabah Based on one of the novels above, write on any one of the following themes. Give evidence from the novel to support your answer.
a. hope
b. friendship
c. good against evil.
Johor Choose one of the novels above. Then, write a brief description of a place that you find interesting.


Sunday 14 August 2011

BEST OF LUCK

Tomorrow is the English Language SPM Trial.
Answer all sections well.
BEST OF LUCK!

PMR Trial Results

Congratulations to the top scorers in both my classes.

3 Cermat
1. Mohammad Izzat Afiq bin Jaiman
2. Balqis Nur Ainasuha
3. Lalina Devi Loganathan
4. Tan Seng Ying

Well done summaries were from :
Chwee Sheng Woei, Aisha An'Nur Bte Amran and Mohammad Izzat

Nurul Farieza bt Nordin gave a good response for the literature section.

3 Hormat
1. Meerashini Raja
2. Cheong Su Pei
3. Chin Xuan Qi


Opening Lines and Ending Lines of an essay

Hope these opening lines and ending lines of an essay are utilized when writing an essay.A
OPENING LINES
n  USE WORDS TO CREATE AN ATMOSPHERE
     Eg.  “The door creaked as it opened, cobwebs hung low from the ceiling...”
n  START WITH AN ACTION
     Eg.1 “I ran as fast as I could. I could hear footsteps following me....”
     Eg 2  The sound of breaking glass caught my attention. I got up with a start. Then I   
               jumped out of my bed and tiptoed downstairs.
n  TRY A SURPRISE TECHNIQUE BY SAYING SOMETHING TOTALLY UNEXPECTED
     Eg. “I stared at his green eyes.”
n  BEGIN WITH A QUESTION
     Eg. “What makes a child rebel?”
n  USE A QUOTATION TO INTRODUCE YOUR ARGUMENT
     Eg. “Two is company,” they say but in this case they spelt trouble
n  START WITH A FACTUAL STATEMENT WHICH WILL BE YOUR THEME
     Eg. “Nobody can live without air.”
n  BEGIN WITH A DIALOGUE
    Eg. “Don’t move! There’s a gun pointed at your temple,” a harsh voice warned. I froze in  
            terror. As I stood rooted to the ground, I followed the movements of the stranger.
n  DESCRIBE THE SETTING
     Eg. The large house stood in the middle of a large plot of land. The garden was full of
flowering plants of all kinds. As the flowers were all blooming, their different scents mixed, sending out a sweet aroma. The shady  trees along the meandering path provided a cool shade from the blazing sun.
n  BEGIN WITH FLASHBACK
     Eg   The frail figure leaned on his walking stick. He adjusted his glasses at the tip of his
            nose and looked at the children playing in the field. His memory went back to the
            time when he was a boy. It was 60 years ago. He was only six years old.
n  BEGIN WITH A DESCRIPTION OF YOUR MAIN CHARACTER
     Eg   Jeremy was in his late fifties, a tall man with wiry grey hair, alert eyes, a firm mouth
             and a prominent nose. He was always laughing with delight or fuming with anger.
nTRY A S
METHODS OF ENDING
v  SUM UP YOUR IDEAS
   Eg. “Handphones, all said and  done, are here to stay.”
v  END A STORY WITH A CLIMAX
   Eg. “We turned around.  There  was nobody there!”
v  FINISH BY ANTICIPATING WHAT WILL HAPPEN IN THE FUTURE
   Eg. “Who knows, perhaps we will have robots doing all our chores in the future!”
v  USE A SENTENCE THAT HAS AN AIR OF  FINALITY
    Eg. “It was a lovely day, one I will never forget.”
v  MAIN CHARACTER’S MEMORIES
    Eg. I will never forget the time I went against my mother’s advice. Even after all these
          years, the incident remains fresh in my memory and I still keep thinking about it every
           now and then.
v  MAIN CHARACTER’S WISH OR HOPE
    Eg. How I wish that the whole incident could be erased from my memory forever. I also
           pray that I will never again be tempted to use the lonely path again.
v  MAIN CHARACTER’S DECISION
     Eg . From that day onwards, I decided that I would never use the short cut across the   
            cemetery. Even if someone agreed to accompany me or if someone suggested taking
            the short cut, I still preferred to take the longer and safer route home.
v  A LESSON LEARNT FROM THE EXPERIENCE
     Eg.   Every cloud has a silver lining, goes the saying. Although I experience great anguish,
             the incident has taught me a valuable lesson – that I should always listen to good
             advice.


Model questions, answer and personal response

The following are the novels studied in the literature components in English Language.

Catch Us If You Can  - Catherine MacPhail
Step By Wicked Step  -  Anne Fine
The Curse                       -  Lee Su Ann
Choose any one  of the novels above and answer the questions below.
It is important to have a person that you look up to in your life.”
From the novel that you have read, write about one character that you look up to. Give reasons why you choose him/her.
Starting
The novel that I have chosen is “Step by Wicked Step” by Anne Fine. Richard Harwick’s story is heart-rending with its tale of a lonely rich boy who is unable to accept that someone has taken the place of his father who has passed away.
A CHARACTER WHO DESERVES OUR SYMPATHY
Richard Clayton Harwick
-          Runs away from home
-          Unbearable living with his stepfather
REASON 1
-          Always lost and lonely child – nobody tells him about his dying father, has to be brave, father – take care of his mother and sister. Only a young lad.
-          Family fails to understand him. Hurt but cannot speak out. No one to talk to.
REASON 2
-          Mother remarries a cold and unfeeling character – conform to his ways
-          Accuses Richard to be wild and undisciplined
-          Sends Richard to Mordanger School (4 years)
-          Comes back – mother and sister get along well with Mr. Coldstone.
-          Could not take it – decides to run away
-          Torn between hatred for his stepfather and his love for his mother and sister.
REASON 3
-          Makes a wrong decision
-          Immatured – running away solve problems
-          Has severe consequences on his mother, his sister and even his stepfather.
-          Does more harm, mother dies of heartbreak trying to locate him, his stepfather of fury when he finds that Richard is the owner of Old Harwick Hall, and his sister marries someone whom she does not love but wealthy to keep the search for him till her dying day.
-          Richard not happy – decision resulted in so much sorrow
CONCLUSION
      Brought suffering upon himself – immatured
      Led a sheltered life until sudden death of his father
      Tears his whole world apart and heaps a pile of responsibilities upon his frail shoulders
      Deserves our sympathy

FAMILY LOVE IS IMPORTANT
      Important ingredient for happiness
      Before father’s death, can assume Richard’s family as close-knit and full of love.
      After father’s death, hatred for stepfather, love is gone, left with sorrow and pain.
RICHARD LOVES HIS FATHER
      Hurt and angry – no one tells him that his father is dying.
      Only summoned to his father’s deathbed after suffering much anxiety
      Disappointed – father did not notice instead wants him to be brave
      Mr. Coldstone finds him to be rude and disrespectful. He treats him even more harshly after he becomes his stepfather. Richard clashes violently with him. He declares he will be “no son of his”
RICHARD LOVES HIS MOTHER AND SISTER
      Disappointed that his mother does not stick up for him when Mr Coldstone puts pressure
      Charlotte and Richard – Coldstone causes a rift between them. Richard accuses his sister of having forgotten their father. He refuses to hear his sister out and thinks that is better for everyone if he leaves home.
      Torn between love for his mother and sister and hatred for his stepfather.
      Runs away, sacrificing his love. Comes twice to the mansion. Coldstone – does not go in.
MOTHER LOVES RICHARD
      Yearns to see him after his departure. It creates extreme grief for his mother who never stops looking for him
      Ends up spending the family’s fortune
      Dies of a broken heart without ever seeing him again
CHARLOTTE LOVES RICHARD
      Also made an ultimate sacrifice for Richard
      16th birthday marries a man, Charles Devere whom she does not love but wealthy – to keep alive the search for Richard.
      She seems to die ‘in fever of childbirth” as she predicts before Richard is found.
      Richard’s mother and sister’s share of waiting and hoping to reunite with Richard were in vain
RICHARD’S LOVE FOR FAMILY
      Loves but not strong enough to face obstacles that come along
      Love is important to keep a family together – strong and deep to stand any test
      Richard loves his family but his deep hatred has clouded his judgement.
      He needs to learn to accept  the fact that his father is dead and he has to move on, as his sister Charlotte pleads him to. He cannot run away from a problem and think that by doing so it will solve the problem.
CONCLUSION
      Richard’s rash decision to leave home causes devastating ripple effect which leaves him a broken man when he learns from his sister’s letter of what has happened during his time away. Richard’s action offers a powerful lesson about the need to think carefully before making any decision.
      Therefore, we see how important the family unit is, whether it is a normal family unit or reconstructed one of step parents. The family unit is important to ensure that the children can grow up in a happy and healthy environment.
      Mr Coldstone’s negative character and behaviour teach us to be more thoughtful and forgiving. His character also teaches us not to feel that we must always have the upper hand in our dealings and not to be too grasping. In wanting to control everything from the household and the people in it, Mr Coldstone loses everything in the end.
THEME OF RESPONSIBILITY
      Divorce or separation in the family – frightening for children – caught in between.
      Complicated – when a parent remarries – cope with a total stranger under the same roof. (give textual evidence- When Richard’s father dies and his mother marries Mr Coldstone, his whole world falls apart. He hates the cruel and overbearing  Coldstone but he has no one to complain to and he cannot depend on his weak mother to defend him.
      Responsible parents help children to adjust to the situation. However, irresponsible adult like Richard’s mother leave their children to fend for themselves and let things spiral out of control. (Textual evidence)
CONCLUSION
      Children portray responsibility but not adults
      Children are caught in the web.
      Richard’s story is heart-wrenching with its tale of a lonely rich boy who cannot come to terms with his father’s death and his mother’s new status as the wife of another man. Unfortunately, having a wicked stepfather and living in the same house with him makes it all the more agonising and impossible for Richard to endure his ordeal. Each person longs to love and to be loved
OTHER THEMES
      Decision making
      Expectations in life
      Dealing with problems
      Family relationships
      Adults should look around them and listen.
      children lack choices and real opportunity to speak frankly and openly about their feelings and situations to the adults around them.
      Ability to accept the reality of change and be able to move on is essential for the happiness of the person and the people around him. (Richard is unable to accept the new man in his mother’s life. So he makes life miserable for himself, his mother, his stepfather and his sister as well. Richard makes a decision to leave home that brings untold grief to his mother who eventually dies of heartbreak, as well as his sister who misses him till her dying day. His decision also sours his mother’s relationship with his stepfather.)
MORAL VALUES
      Family relationships should be nurtured and not taken for granted
      When making decisions, we should take into consideration everyone’s interest.( When parents decide to divorce, their decision not only affects them but their children as well. They break up the family harmony too, without finding out how their children feel)
      We have expectations like family happiness, support and encouragement from all members of a family.
      We should work towards retaining a strong family home by giving support and encouragement to everyone.
      Do not look down on others.
      Do not give up easily when we are faced with problems.
      We must try to accept things the way they are and make the best out of it.
LINES TAKEN FROM THE TEXT…..
      “Now you must be brave for me. I will not have your father go troubled to his grave.”
      “You must be good to your mother and sister. You are the man of the house now. They will depend on you.”
      “…I have learnt nothing except how to freeze, and how to starve, and how to be bullied and beaten.”
      “… I wish it burnt to ashes.”
      Which is a “cold corner of hell” for him
      “Its very rumble turns my stomach to knots.”
      “the black bat”
      “It was more like a tomb” “… in this silent mausoleum…”